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pokemon b+w Touko

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.:: ♥BLACK AND WHITE BLACK AND WHITE BLACK AND WHITE ♥::.
wah~~ XD something colorful :heart:
I was faster then I thought ^w^ And I'm happy with the result =D my first pokemon fanart XD

character: Touko from black and white ^^

hope you like it ^^

ps: I added the watermark because I saw a lot of stolen fanart on the i-net about this character (although I don't think that anyone would steal my work XD
pss: lineart:[link]
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1100x1554px 2.18 MB
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Wow, Hilda is as pretty as ever in this drawing! You did a nice job capturing her "fun" side of her personality, and I really like this drawing a lot.
However, like most critiques I've written, there are a few things that I am going to nitpick on:
First off, her ear looks too small compared to her head. You should also move it up a little, since the ear is usually to the eye or the eyelid. Her thighs look uneven too, compared to the bottom of her legs. Her thumb on the right hand also looks to small compared to her other fingers (it could be for perspective, but it still bothers me). Also, the white things on her shorts should be so puffy, since they're supposed to be pockets (this isn't that important, but I still wanted to point that out.)
Still, overall the image looks very nice. I hope you're okay with this critique, and thank you for your time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>